Wednesday, September 17, 2008

On extended metaphor

I had to write this poem thing for English class so I thought I'd share:
Rest is orange.
Calm is yellow.
Quiet is brown.
Comfort is red.
Peace is a fall leaf.
She does not fight the wind,
But lets herself be carried
down
down
down.
No exertion is wasted.
She simply lets life swirl her as she floats.
Troubling storms come.
They ravage, leaving scars.
But she remains still through it all.
Her appearance is of little concern.
Even with holes she displays her beauty,
A gift to the world.
Lying on the ground, she asks
But does not--never begs
To be noticed.
No activities busy her.
She is content to just be.
Whether trampled or saved and treasured,
She is a leaf.
That is all she needs.
Rest is orange.
Calm is yellow.
Quiet is brown.
Comfort is red.
You pray for peace,
I gift you a fall leaf.

8 comments:

Marc said...

ah ahha lol. cool I like how you wrapped it all up. I thought that that was clever. So does lydia know or is it just me? I promise my word is good.

Marc said...

You know after all we talked about tonight I just have one question, Well actually I have a few but this one is the one I want to ask...... How do you put up with me?
Seriously I am an idiot ha ha and you know that, from several occasions. Well I am excited about wednesday. But I have decided I want to go to the gazebo too. Some how. I have not figured out how I am going to but I am.

lindsey said...

Weird...that was gonna be my ploy. I was gonna make you come and then say I needed to talk to you. We'd leave...magic...I'm a genius... No Lyd doesn't know...I don't think, I haven't told her anyway.

Marc said...

That is weird. It is funny cause if anybody else reads this then well, I think they will be a little confused. So in advance, I am sorry. But then again is that really terms for apologizing or is it one of those things that you just ignore. I will do both....... Random....... haha

Marc said...

As a result, you can show others the goodness of God, for He called you out of the darkness into His wonderful light. 1 peter 2:9 Just thought I would share.

Rob said...

So...I just wanted to leave a comment so you don't have to just talk back and forth to marcus. (marcus -just kidding) (lindsey - not really, I totally mean it). I miss you Lindsey! I hope your school year is going well and you are still enjoying the beauty that God has given us to see EVERY SINGLE DAY!!!

lydia said...

do i know yet?
lol. just kidding.
i reali like this poem though.
its just so awesome how open your eyes to these things and be able to but it in such lovely words.

Marc said...

somebodys a CREEPER.... (-;